In the European market, the fall of milk prices is caused by the economic crisis and the fact that supply exceeds demand. Although the prices in the shops fluctuate, dairy farmers have seen their prices decrease. If the farmers want a higher income, the EU might have to tighten the quotas. On the other hand, dairy farmers should be more independant and creative, so they can prove they are not milked out.
Annelie Carlier
Source: http://www.economist.com/world/europe/displaystory.cfm?story_id=14170799
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S4: independent
All four sentences have almost equal length, which reduces good rhythm. Flow and focus are ok.
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