dinsdag 14 oktober 2008

first crisis,then party

Shortly after their problems on the stock market,Fortis organized a luxurious party in Monaco.Fortis insurance Belgium hired the most expensive hotel in the tax haven and invited 50 guests.This action will cost the troubled Belgian bank and insurance company 150000 Euro.Fortis declares that is aware of the controversy among his stockholders.
Sam De Bondt

1 opmerking:

Steff zei

Title not 100% clear
Shortly after... BEGAN?
150,000 (use comma)
final stce not clear: 'that they are aware of the controversy among their stockholders' (but what 'controversy' do you mean? Not clear at all!)