maandag 13 oktober 2008

May we fear the worst?

Experts predict that the economy will collapse in a way that has never been seen before since the Wall Street crash of 1930. As a result of this breakdown the worldwide growth is at its most sluggish, therefore global recession is according to some economists unavoidable. In America and Europe there already is depressing evidence that proofs the approach of the downturn of the economy (the production drops, feeble manufacturing, ...). Considering that Japan too is getting more fragile each month, we may fear the worst; if the depression strikes the affluent world, the consequences will be very dark!
Jolien De Baerdemaeker
(http://www.economist.com/finance/displaystory.cfm?story_id=12381879)

1 opmerking:

Steff zei

Fine text, nicely coherent!
Details:
worldwide growth (no 'the' needed)
comma after 'breakdown'
semi-colon (;) after sluggish
'according to...' should be put at the end of the sentence
PROVES
production (no 'the' needed)