Since the financial crisis approached into a critical phase last month, the Finance Ministers of the G7 needed to come up with a strong rescue plan to save the global system by thinking the unthinkable.
In contrast with earlier times, the G7 Finance Ministers no longer believe in the old purist approach, which believes in a ‘creative destruction’ and at the last reunion the free-market solution did no longer dominate the thought of nationalisation.
The G7 agreed on a rescue plan that will only have an international impact if there are 3 changes established concerning finance policy.
In case the chancellor’s plan doensn’t succeed to restore the confidence, there are only few possible solutions left to try to end this crisis. http://www.guardian.co.uk
Lara Alboort
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OK, but not very clear what the point is - try to be more specific and explicit; zoom in on sth that is really newsworthy
approach into: drop 'into'
needed --> have needed?
repetition of 'believe' in 2nd stce should be avoided
reunion --> meeting
what 3 changes? not very clear
the chancellor? who do you mean?
succeed in restoring
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