dinsdag 14 oktober 2008

Why don't you write a book?


If the financial crisis would be good for anyone, it would probably be for authors.
Many authors believe that their books about the banking bust will lead them to a successful career and the publishers can’t wait to sign up authors because they think those will lead them to huge sales.
Nowadays the world is submerged with several books about this worldwide confessed subject.
Unfortunately this will not be a success because those topics can never handle about the present economy and even when it is a success, it is due to good fortune.




Ine Beeckman

1 opmerking:

Steff zei

Fine topic! Watch out for unclear reference, though!
First sentence: could be more simple, sounds like Dunglish (Dutch English...)
the world is submerged... ?
'this worldwide confessed subject'
'this': not clear what it refers to
'those topics': unclear reference again
'handle about' --> deal with
'it is a success': not clear what 'it' refers to
final 'it': cannot be coreferential with the it' in the first part of the sentence